Eddie Thomas 9/9/13

Gale- Mocking-jay

Eddie Thomas

     

Authors Notes: 1.The details and the dialog. 2.The dialog. 3.Thinking of the climax. 4.to fully finish the essay.

As Gale walked down the warm road.Seeing all the burnt remains in the District. All the destroyed houses and dead bodies, even some scattered bones. He feels that someone is watching him. As he keeps going he sees someone in the woods. He screams to them “HEY! What are you doing over there?” He notice the boy is using a crossbow. So Gale goes forward to walk towards the boy with caution.

          As Gale gets closer to the boy,he asks, “who are you?”. The boys states his name.”I am Eddie Thomas. Who are you?". "My name is Gale. So are you hunting?" asked Gale. "No I'm just shooting those targets." Replied Eddie, as he pointed toward the targets at the far end of the woods. "Can I try and take a shot?" asked Gale. "Uhh sure." Eddie hesitantly replies as he hands over the smooth wooden crossbow. Gale takes very close looks down at the wooden crossbow.

         Slowly Gale loads the crossbow. Then takes his time aiming down the target through the sights. Slightly before Gale took his first shot Eddie quickly says something. He says to move closer down the hill and deeper into the woods to get a better shot. Gale quickly agrees.

        

         As they walk down the steep hill coming closer to the targets Eddie hears a loud noise.(*SNAP! CRRAACKK!*). Then a scream, it had came from Gale. Quickly Eddie turns back to Gale he had fallen into hole about six feet deep. And about Two feet wide. As Eddie looked down at Gale he noticed something wrong besides the deep hole. It was that Gale was holding his right leg.

         

       Eddie quickly had asked "Are you okay?". Gale replies in a pained voice "I think it might be broken or at least sprained."